一、各种前后不一致说话肯定前面说完了后面得跟上吧！比如：When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.
one是第三人称单数，而且have应改为has，want应改为wants；典型的主谓不一致，要改写的没改写。
改为：When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).
二、中式思维要人命啊！
中式化。比如：There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析：“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本两个句子很正常，但用中式思维把两个句子一连起来，感觉就不对了，而且一种浓厚的中式乡村英语范袭来。
改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
